Post by huangshi715 on Feb 15, 2024 4:20:39 GMT -6
Every page can be better and brutal honesty is the fastest route. A landing page without clarity is like Game of Thrones without the ‘previously on.’ Confusing. CLICK TO TWEET 1. The Weekly Sticky _startgettingstickies-560 Ding. Elevator doors open! Out we go… Be clear, not clever. “Put Your Patient Education on Automa-TIC”? Wordplay, great. Now I have to figure out your inside joke. It’s okay for the folks in my office to deal with my incomprehensible three-step jokes, but it’s not acceptable to put your visitors through the same. The fact that you put it in quotes is both a mystery and a misfortune. What is your CTA talking about? “.
This is a gross context misassumption. Not only do I not know what Senegal Email Liststickies are – aside from the universally branded post-it notes that everyone calls stickies – but you’re asking me to want them before I know what your version of them is. The hero shot is wasted. Your hero shot is a visual opportunity to showcase your product or service in action. But what you’ve chosen to do here is show what only looks like a web page talking about mechanical lubricant in a lame, editorial manner.
Watch your language please: Go ahead and read the copy beneath “What the Heck is a Sticky?”: “It’s an New Principled tool…” That’s not English. And why are “New” and “Principled” capitalized? Poor grammar and spelling are trust and conversion killers. Icky Sticky: The middle testimonial is creepy. Read this out loud: “I’ve enjoyed MANY complements on these Stickies.” #deepbreath, continuing… “Just last week I had a patient who works in marketing share how much she enjoys them.” There is so much inappropriately sexually charged innuendo in that testimonial.
This is a gross context misassumption. Not only do I not know what Senegal Email Liststickies are – aside from the universally branded post-it notes that everyone calls stickies – but you’re asking me to want them before I know what your version of them is. The hero shot is wasted. Your hero shot is a visual opportunity to showcase your product or service in action. But what you’ve chosen to do here is show what only looks like a web page talking about mechanical lubricant in a lame, editorial manner.
Watch your language please: Go ahead and read the copy beneath “What the Heck is a Sticky?”: “It’s an New Principled tool…” That’s not English. And why are “New” and “Principled” capitalized? Poor grammar and spelling are trust and conversion killers. Icky Sticky: The middle testimonial is creepy. Read this out loud: “I’ve enjoyed MANY complements on these Stickies.” #deepbreath, continuing… “Just last week I had a patient who works in marketing share how much she enjoys them.” There is so much inappropriately sexually charged innuendo in that testimonial.